Onyx @ Elm Park School
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Thursday, March 5, 2020
My Seaside Senses Poem
My Reflection
I have been learning to use adjectives to make my writing more interesting. I found this hard because its hard to compare to my picture. I really wanted to go to the beach while making it. My next step is to write more ideas.
Tuesday, February 18, 2020
My welcome post 2020
Welcome to my year 4 learning blog. This year I am in room 13 and my teacher is Mrs Fletcher.
I enjoy playing rugby and scoring a goal. I have this year is to be an amazing rugby player.
I hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback.
I enjoy playing rugby and scoring a goal. I have this year is to be an amazing rugby player.
I hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback.
Thursday, November 14, 2019
Adding Detail
I was learning to add detail to my ideas.I can write more then one idea related to the topic. It was tricky because you had to come up with some words to describe the topic you are talking about.
Wednesday, November 13, 2019
EPS Values
I was learning to describe what each EPS value means. I can describe what respect resilience and responsibility means. It was tricky because I did not know what each thing meant and I just guessed.
Tuesday, November 12, 2019
Persuasive Writing
I was learning to write a persuasive piece of writing. I can give reasons why I agree or disagree with a topic. It was tricky because you had to try your best to make your writing perfect you wanted to go your fastest but not rush on words you don´t know or just normal work like writing normal work so you basically go a little fast on words you don´t know and not fast fast but fast.
Tuesday, October 29, 2019
Art Exhibition
It was hard when we had to do the feet of the kiwi especially the hard little details and the little specs. But the one thing that was the easiest part was the body (and the beak). I liked when we all started to paint our kiwi. I really liked mine because I added the best detail I could and I tried my best. Tt was the best art in my opinion.
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